Saturday, November 29, 2008

The newest chapter of Compic Strip

My next chapter. I'm only going to post about 2 more after this until I post the entire story. Hope you like it!
Chapter 5
“Well that was weird.” Jake replied, unsteadily on his feet. “Not really.” Tracy snorted in disbelief. “Gosh, Tracy. It’s my first time. You could have warned me.” Jake fell onto the concrete.
“I didn’t know there was anything to be warned about.” She said, looking down at him. “Anyways, who is this Charlie we’re looking for?” Jake stood up. “Her name is Charlie Sinclair. She has an ability like us.” She replied, casually.
The duo quietly waited for the elevator to arrive to bring them up to the top. When it finally arrived, they loaded the car, and it finally reached the top.
On top stood Robert Pattinson, the actor who planned to star in Twilight. Jake was so stunned. Twilight was his favorite book
“N-nice to meet you Mr. P-pattenson.” Jake said, stuttering. Robert chuckled. “Nice to meet you also Jake.”
“Come on, stop joking around Charlie.” Tracy said. Robert looked left and right. He quickly turned into a short, young girl. She looked very young, and Jake thought she was eleven. She had long sandy blonde hair, and sea green eyes. And she was also breathtakingly beautiful.
The girl chuckled. “C’mon Tracy! I was just having some fun!” she complained. “We don’t have time for that.” Tracy quickly snapped back. “Sorry. Lost my temper for a moment. Anymore news on the vampires?” Tracy asked
“Umm… yea about that Tracy. I kind of misread my readings. No vampires in our future.” Charlie said. Tracy was fuming. Her pale skin was turning a bright red. “You. Mean. To. Tell. Me. That. I. explained. Him. Everything. When. He didn’t. Need. To know. About it?!?!” Tracy screamed
“Calm, Tracy calm!” Jake said. After that Tracy calmed down. “Once again I’m sorry. I have quite a bit of a temper.” She added, looking down at the ground ashamed of herself. “It’s fine. Now let’s get to work.” The girl said.
“Oh Jake, this is Charlie. She has multiple powers. Strength, speed, seeing the future, shape-shifting, healing, you name it.” As Tracy mentioned all of her powers, Charlie looked up proudly, with a crooked smile.
Jake didn’t know what to say. “Let’s go somewhere more private. They’ll be looking for us.” She said, emphasizing the they’ll. “She’s right. The cabin house?” she asked. Charlie nodded and was suddenly out of sight. “Once again, hold on Jake.” Suddenly they were in the middle of the woods, standing in front of a cabin-like house. “Welcome to the cabin house Jake.” Tracy said.
Once they stepped inside, it was nothing like the exterior. The oak walls were painted white, and everything looked like it would be from the future. There was a weird shaped egg chair in the end of the room, and a bright neon, blue and orange hammock in the center of the room. There was a computer in the back with no keyboard. Charlie was on it, quietly tapping her fingers on the screen, rather than a keyboard.
“Touch screen.” Charlie said. “Cool, huh?” She added. Jake nodded. “I know your wondering how I knew. It’s because I can read minds. I’m sorry I forgot to tell you before. If you have any weird thoughts that you don’t want me hearing, I suggest you stop thinking them now before I hear them.” She paused for a minute. “That sounded unintelligible.” Charlie added, chuckling to herself.
“No offense Charlie, but I think you should stop advertising a computer.” Tracy said, irritated. “Humph. Fine.” Charlie then crossed her arms. Tracy rolled her eyes. “Grow up.” She hissed. “I can’t.” Charlie muttered sadly.
“Wait, what do you mean you can’t?” Jake asked curiously. Charlie sighed. “Can’t age. Guess it was a package deal with the powers. And that’s not even the most of it.”
“Charlie, I don’t think you should tell him.” Tracy warned. “Tell me what Tracy?” Jake asked. Charlie stood up. “I’m exactly 738 years old.” She said and smiled. Jake looked at Tracy, then to Charlie, and then back to Tracy. Suddenly the room was filled with a roaring of laughter.
Charlie frowned. “I’m serious.” Suddenly Jake stopped laughing. Charlie stared out the window for a moment “have you ever read Twilight?” she asked. “Of course!” He said excitedly.
Tracy sat down and shook her head. Charlie chuckled. “There’s another part of me you don’t know about.” Charlie said some-what sheepishly. “I’m a vampire.” She said, looking down
Jake was shocked. “I guess you could say I’m like the Cullen’s. I’m a ‘vegetarian’ as we call it. I’ve had my powers before I was turned.” She said, explaining to Jake what he was so confused about.
“What was that?” Charlie said, looking out the window. “What?” Tracy asked, suddenly leaping out of her chair. “Didn’t you hear it? Oh wait, oops.” Charlie looked down once again. “Yuck. You don’t smell that?” Charlie asked. Tracy and I both shook our heads. “Oh no. No, no, no, no, no, no, no!!” She was suddenly scrambling around grabbing as much stuff as she could and throwing it into a bag.
“What’s wrong?” Tracy insisted. Jake was utterly and positively confused. “They found us!” Charlie hissed through her teeth.

2 comments:

DHI said...

I think it's a little weird lol. I didn't really read it over till now... but thanks though!

Anonymous said...

no problem!